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Hi Donna: I have a question about the letter. The beginning line of the letter states that "they suffer daily." That statement makes a very powerful impact right at the beginning which is great because I think it will get their attention right off. However, my two grandsons are only 4 and 2 1/2 years old. At their young age, this would not be the case for them. Should I change it to read that they "suffer from a devastating disease or disorder", or for the sake of unity just leave it as it is. I do not want to start everyone picking apart the letter because it is fine the way it is. I just want to clarify this point for those of us who have sons or grandsons who are very young and only at the beginning stages. I know you said to personlize the letter, but I don't if this is considered personalizing or changing the content. I will abide by whatever you say. Terry Porcaro
Hi Terry:
I'm going to let the writer, Paul Cliff, answer your question. The reason being is because Oprah only allows so many words or characters in the email and then it won't go thru.
Paul: Is there room for those who have younger boys to add the word will as in the will suffer daily?
Just a thought.
Terry Porcaro said:Hi Donna: I have a question about the letter. The beginning line of the letter states that "they suffer daily." That statement makes a very powerful impact right at the beginning which is great because I think it will get their attention right off. However, my two grandsons are only 4 and 2 1/2 years old. At their young age, this would not be the case for them. Should I change it to read that they "suffer from a devastating disease or disorder", or for the sake of unity just leave it as it is. I do not want to start everyone picking apart the letter because it is fine the way it is. I just want to clarify this point for those of us who have sons or grandsons who are very young and only at the beginning stages. I know you said to personlize the letter, but I don't if this is considered personalizing or changing the content. I will abide by whatever you say. Terry Porcaro
Hi Terry and Donna,
I am going to jump the gun and answer this for Paul, he and I wrote the letter together, as we do everything. Terry- feel free to make changes that suit you the best however this specific letter was written with the intention of staying within the 2000 word format Oprah requires. If you have the time and interest in making the changes, and then counting the words, please feel free as long as your efforts fit Oprah's criteria so they don't throw the letter out.
thank you for doing this with us,
I wish the grandparents in MY family would join up!
cheryl
Jacobs Mommom said:Hi Terry:
I'm going to let the writer, Paul Cliff, answer your question. The reason being is because Oprah only allows so many words or characters in the email and then it won't go thru.
Paul: Is there room for those who have younger boys to add the word will as in the will suffer daily?
Just a thought.
Terry Porcaro said:Hi Donna: I have a question about the letter. The beginning line of the letter states that "they suffer daily." That statement makes a very powerful impact right at the beginning which is great because I think it will get their attention right off. However, my two grandsons are only 4 and 2 1/2 years old. At their young age, this would not be the case for them. Should I change it to read that they "suffer from a devastating disease or disorder", or for the sake of unity just leave it as it is. I do not want to start everyone picking apart the letter because it is fine the way it is. I just want to clarify this point for those of us who have sons or grandsons who are very young and only at the beginning stages. I know you said to personlize the letter, but I don't if this is considered personalizing or changing the content. I will abide by whatever you say. Terry Porcaro
Sent one the Ellen Degeneres Show no problem. It must be the Oprah site is experiencing problems then. I'll try sending the letter out to her again via email in a few hours.
Hi Karen:
I just sent to Oprah thru both her website and email address and the fax went thru as well.
Karen Barnett said:Sent one the Ellen Degeneres Show no problem. It must be the Oprah site is experiencing problems then. I'll try sending the letter out to her again via email in a few hours.
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